KIDS’ ADVENTURE, a short story by natureho. Date added: 2009-12-18. Times viewed: 1176.
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- Intro: Everybody like the treasure. But sometimes it will bring you weird horrible curse if it does not belong to you.
KIDS' ADVENTURE - part 1
Topic: Everybody like the treasure. But sometimes it will bring you weird horrible curse if it does not belong to you.
Dean Britton inserts disc into the entrance of golden mine. The door opens. Hundreds of huge stone tigers with wings watch at the entrance. Each tiger has different horrible shape and style. The eyes of each tiger with different codes are as abuse as puzzle. Beside the tigers, lie plenty of weird skeletons on the ground and start getting up. Behind the tigers, great water fall burst out of the high cliff to the endless way of golden mine. Swinging in the water, many terror monsters fly up and down to burst fire in the air.
Walking to the eccentric stone tigers, Dean cautiously keys pass code on the eyes of one of tigers and deletes the functions of all fatal machines. Suddenly the water divides one road in the center. Monsters were push to the roadside of water. Moving horror skeletons attack Dean. And then Dean immediately jumps to one tiger when skeletons close him. Tiger starts movement and flying into the dark endless mine before water and monsters close.
The golden mine is very huge, dark and weird mountain hole. In the end of mine there is one magnificent temple. The center of temple is shining golden altar.
The altar has plenty of gold and diamond. Shining maze lights surround the altar. The center of altar has one big shining crystal Buddha head. Buddha head is naturally made by outer space meteor. He is the original source of power.
Dean humbly prays to Buddha. And then he walks to the altar and keys the password into the sensor. The protecting light disappears. Dean taking some diamonds into his bag un-carefully touches Buddha.
Suddenly there is horrible sound in the end of golden mine. A big fire ball bursts out. Dean can not but leaving the diamonds and flees away immediately. He exhaustedly runs and runs and runs out of golden mine and shut down the door.
Fiction-f4-02 Lovely Warm Home
It’s a bright night. The sky is clear and has big moon.
Danver, the small town, is very quiet of trees, streets, stores and exquisite villas. Dean Britton, 35 years old, good looking and handsome and affectionate, indulgent father, pays attention on computer and very concentrate on it in his library.
His two kids are watching TV in the living room. He did not stay with them in consequence of he got very important and urgent thing to do tonight.
He careful copy one micro disc and takes it out of computer and inserts into the doll.
[Well done. Everything is set up now. Good, good.] Dean satisfies his work by dint of fancying so many errands.
At the same time, one black car quietly stops in front of Dean’s house. Two tough guys in the car are watching screen of cellar phone and read the instruction.
Denis, teenage of young boy with brown hair and blue eyes, is boring the program of TV and walks into his room to play computer game. [Denis, don’t you watch TV cartoon? It’s very funny. See.] Cheryl laughs. Cheryl, small girl of blonde hair and grey eyes, is Denis’ sister
Fiction-f4-03 E-mail & Internal Chat
[Boring! You watch TV by yourself. I’m going to play TV game in the room. Denis goes to his room.
Denis opens computer and gets one mail from his aunt. [What’s that? It’s strange.] He is gratefully observes and curiously and chats with her because he has never seen his aunt before.
[Hi, aunt Dashy. This is Denis. I’m very surprised and interested in your mail, although I’ve never met you before. How are you?]
[I’m fine, thank you.]
[Where do you live?]
[In San Francisco, welcome you to come to see me.]
[Thanks your invitation. I’ll ask dad to take me to see you this spring.]
[Great, son. But I do not know you.]
[Here is the picture of me, Cheryl my little sister and dad. Hope you like it.] Denis mailed picture to Dashy and got her feedback. Denis laughs and cheers at picture of aunt Dashy. [Dashy, you look young and beautiful.]
[What are you laughing, Denis?] Cheryl walks in.
[Cheryl. Come. This is aunt Dashy. Say hello to Dashy.]
[Hello, Dashy.] Cheryl speaks to window and to Denis.
[No, no, not there. In computer] Denis uses internal chat.
[Cute. Hai, hai, hai…. ] Cheryl laughs and plays with Denis.
Fiction-f4-04 Suspense Danger of Bad Guys Coming
In the backyard, two men in black suit slid into the house. They are such strong, stud and steel as soldiers. Their steps are quiet and quickly moving. They seem to do some mission in Dean’s house tonight.
[What’s up, kids?] Dean walks into the room.
[Dad, it’s aunt Dashy. I’m chatting with her in the computer.]
[Cute.] Cheryl kisses Dean.
[Dad, why didn’t we see aunt Dashy before?] Denis requests.
[My dear, Dashy went to San Francisco and lived there for many years ago. She never saw us before. That’s why you did not know her.]
[Can we go to San Francisco this spring to see aunt Dashy? I miss her.]
Suddenly there is crack sound in the outside.
………………………. Dean holds a while in a state of hearing and thinking.
[Please, dad.] Kids ask. [Please…]
[Okay, sweet heart,] Dean embraces Cheryl. [with a great deal of pleasure at any time. But it’s too late and you get to sleep now. My dear.] Dean pushes kids to bed and says good bye to Dashy and closes the computer.
[Dad, story.] Cheryl pleads.
[All right. Tonight I tell you a very interesting story about treasure adventure. Now go to bed. My dear.] Kids lie on the bed.
Fiction-f4-05 Story about Treasure Adventure
[Long, long ago, there is treasure as high, huge as mountain hidden in a big, high golden mine of weird mountain.] Denis and Cheryl, in a state of start, open mouth largely.
Dean continues [But the treasure has weird and horrible curse. Whoever gets it will be dead in the accident. But lots of people included your grand father did not believe the curse and rob treasure whole of their life. Of course they failed and died in the end.]
[Why?] Kids get up.
[That’s because they got the wrong password to open the golden mine and started terrible fire of volcano. Many years later, one young man went to the graveyard. And found his father’s grave was opened and burn. At the underground of cemetery, occasionally the young man discovered the pass code from his father’s corpse….]
[What happen? Dad.] Denis takes an alarm.
Fiction-f4-06 < Dead & Corpse >
[Did he die?] Cheryl is curious.
[No, he is fine and discovers the golden mine and gets the big, big fortune and lives happy day with his kids in the end.] Dean finishes story. [Darling, this is your birthday gift.]
Dean gives his daughter one lovely doll. [Happy birthday, my sweet heart.]
[Wow. Thanks dad. I love you.] Cheryl kisses Dean.
[Denis, promise me you will take care of Cheryl very well in the future, won’t you?] Dean is ape to speak of other thing and presumes to insinuate.
[Yes, I will. Dad.]
[Don’t forget the story I told you tonight, my dear.] Dean kisses Denis and says good night to them. [Good night, my dear.]
[Good night, dad.]
[Good night, sweet heart.] Dean embraces kids and kisses them again, again and closes the door. His mind seems in state of flutter and wonder and yields its proportion of pleasure and sinking his voice and looking demure for the moment. And then he walks into the library.
Fiction-f4-06 Show Time of Murder
Two men are searching each room and everyplace of the house. They open each desk, cabin, every place. But can not find out any thing they want. Finally they saw Dean walk out of kids’ room and follow him to library.
Dean keys some words into the computer and locks it and is going to get up. The two men appear in the library.
[How dare of you invade my house? Who are you?] Dean gets extremely shock and yells. [Get out my house. Or I’ll call police.]
[Keep quiet. Pal.] Charles, one of two men, impertinently takes out gun and commends Dean. [Give me the disc.]
[I don’t have idea at all.] Dean discomposes.
[Micro disc of treasure.] Charles strictly corrects.
[I don’t have it.] Dean resists.
[Give it to us. Or we will shoot kids.] Another guy warns Dean.
[Don’t. Please. I give it to you.] Dean takes one disc from desk and gives it to them. While handing the disc, Dean beats one guy. They fight each other.
Fiction-f4-07 Danger & Killing
[What’s happen?] Sounds of gun shoot wakes up children. Denis brings Cheryl out of bedroom. [Shue, be quiet, Cheryl.] Cheryl taking her doll follows Denis and walks out of room.
[The disc is a fake. Find other place quickly.] Two men come out and are searching their house.
[Shue, hide here, be quiet, Cheryl.] Denis and Cheryl immediately hide in the small cabin under the ladder and escape from the searching of bad guys.
[Find the kids. Disco shall be in their hand.]
Cheryl shocks and cries. Denis immediately covers her mouth. [Shue. Don’t cry, Cheryl.]
[Dad, dad….] Cheryl murmurs.
[Charles. No kids, no disc.] One man asks Charles.
[Damn, damn, damn it.] Charles lost his temper. [Fire the house and get out of here.] Two men can not discover disc and fiercely burn the house and get out.
Writer: Ho Si-Ming Penname: Nature
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