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Don't Give Me That Look, a short story by JML12. Date added: 2012-08-28. Times viewed: 454.

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Intro: A girl sees her heartbreaker.

Head bowed as I walk,

Shoulders bumping,

We start to talk,

The heart is jumping,

I look into those piercing eyes,

Then I start to remember,

All those lies.

Its you,

You know how to break my soul,

Its what you do,

I feel my heart turn to coal,

But I can't deny,

That I miss us,

I just want to try~,

Again.

The moment is spoilt by her,

Walking down the hall like some Fashion Queen,

She looks to you sir,

With that sheen,

And shimmer in her face,

I realise that you will be mine one day but not this one,

And pick up my pace.

A later day,

Brooding in my room you knock on my door,

To say~,

Sorry for my deception,

Misconception,

And what do I do~?

That smile,

Those apologetic eyes,

Its almost vile,

But I'm not shy,

I forgive and forget,

But I'm not willing to do that for you~,

You broke my heart,

And got girl two,

Piercing like a dart.

Slam goes the door,

And I'm running up the stairs,

That's maybe what I live for,

But who cares?

I do.

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