Summer Heat 4, a short story by alis.barr. Date added: 2012-07-17. Times viewed: 5138.
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- Intro: Sofie stays with her brother during the summer holidays, and things quickly heat up as she finds that she can't keep her hands off his best friend. Could a crush from the past hold romance for the future?
- Raven slept like a baby that night, and woke the next morning with a smile on his face. Sofie had taken every fantasy he'd ever had about her and blown it clean out of the water last night. The perfect combination of seduction and innocence, bold and shy all at once, he couldn't seem to shake her from his mind, and for the first time since he'd seen her that night at the beach party, he didn't fight the feeling. What a pair they made, though, he mused. It wasn't just their age difference, or her brother, she was utterly different from the kind of women he usually dated. Maybe that was what attracted him to her. Raven was tired of high maintenance, bitchy women wound tighter than a spring. Sure, the sex was usually hot as a firecracker, but it was just as brief, flaring out quickly. Sofie...now there was a woman who he could easily see himself settling with for the long run.
That thought startled him, but before Raven could investigate the source of the puzzling emotion, there was a pounding on the door. Evita hollered for him to get up, and he quickly scrambled into his swim shorts, only to stop as the mirror over his dressed showed trailing scratch marks down his back. Sighing, he tossed a tee shirt on and figured that nobody had to know exactly who it was that gave them to him.
At the beach, he got quickly into the water, starting to paddle out. It seemed like nothing was going to bring his good mood down. They surfed for awhile, watching the sun rise over the ocean. Seeing as it was his day off, Aiden stuck with Raven, even as the others left to get ready for work, and they spent time together in comfortable silence, enjoying the great waves that the ocean was kicking up that day. Already the day was promising to be warm, though there were storm clouds on the horizon, with just enough of a breeze to make it comfortable outside.
As they finally dragged their boards up onto the beach, Raven caught Aiden's eye.
“Can I ask an odd question?”
“Fire away.” his friend replied with a grin, shaking water out of his blond hair, so much like Sofie's.
“Is Sofie dating anyone? I mean, I honestly can't see her with any of the usual guys you meet at college.” Raven added a casual reason behind it, and Aiden shrugged, apparently seeing it as an innocent question.
“She keeps to herself a lot, I think. You remember how she was when we were younger? Yeah, hasn't changed much. There was one guy she mentioned when she asked if she could come down here to see me, but now she refuses to talk about him so I guess it didn't work out.” Aiden explained, rubbing his towel across his head to dry off. “Why?”
“She's just really nice. I thought girls like her had gone...extinct or something.” Raven replied, examining a scratch on his board.
“Now where have I heard that tone before...” Aiden twisted his mouth disapprovingly. “Keep in mind that if you hurt my little sister, I’ll kill you. That being said, she's come out of her shell a lot since she started hanging out with you, and that's a good thing.” And leaving that hanging in the air, Aiden headed for the truck. Raven sighed, then hefted his board up and followed. It seemed overly optimistic to take that as permission, yet he couldn't help himself.
That afternoon, he found Sofie on the sidewalk outside the apartment taking pictures of the bright red flowers that adorned the outside of the building. She was on all fours, head down to her camera, leaving that delicious ass of hers stuck in the air. Raven shut the door to the truck quietly, and came to stand behind her. The shorts she wore today were almost indecent, he thought as he admired the shapely lines of her calves and thighs.
“If you keep your butt in the air like that much longer somebody is going to take it as an invitation.” he said, and she laughed softly, clicking another picture.
“Somebody, indeed.” she said, wiggling her ass a little in his direction before straightening back on her knees and pushing up in a fluid motion. Raven smiled at her, and couldn't resist wrapping his arms around her slender waist to pull her against him and kiss her. “We're going to get caught.” she murmured, kissing him again and putting her arms around his neck. She smiled up at him, and Raven felt something kick in his chest.
“So tell me to let go.” he challenged mildly. “How do you feel?” A blush turned her cheeks red, and her petal pink lips parted slightly to allow her tongue to trace the curve of her lower lip.
“Good.” she whispered huskily. “Really good.” Raven leaned in to kiss her again, tasting something sweet on her tongue that made him delve deeper, arms slowly tightening around her. His pulse quickened, and he could feel his cock starting to harden. Sofie drew back barely an inch, eyes half lidded. “Let's go somewhere.” she suggested. “Anywhere. Show me something you like about...here. And on the way back we'll get caught in the rain.”
“You know we would have to pull over somewhere until it stopped.” he followed her trail of thought, and grinned slowly. She came up with the best ideas.
In the truck, they headed right into the direction of the oncoming storm. The silence was filled comfortably by radio music, and Sofie's tiny fingers curled in his. Something about holding her hand felt right, and just being around her was putting him in a good mood.
“I wish I didn't have to go back at the end of summer.” she murmured a moment later, and he glanced at her. She was still staring out her window, and the reflection he could see of her face looked almost pensive.
“Why? Something up at your college?” he inquired, remembering what Aiden had said that morning about a boyfriend that she wouldn't talk about. She looked at him, and shook her head a little, lips curling up in a smile.
“No.” she replied. “I just like spending time with you.” Then she laughed a little, the sound warming his body from head to toe. “Oh God, that sounded so bad.”
“Well it's not like we barely know each other.” he chuckled. “And for the record I like spending time with you too.” He lifted their intertwined hands to kiss the backs of her fingers, and she giggled.
“I just hate sounding clingy like that. My ex- where are we going?” She cut herself off, biting her lip and blushing, and Raven let her change the subject.
“One of my favorite places. You'll see.” he said, thinking of how pleased she would be with the cove.
Within forty minutes they were pulling into a small parking lot set on a sloping hill. Lush green grass waves with the breeze, and there was the scent of rain heavy on the wind. A ways away, tropical forest lined the rest of the cliff. A small cobblestone path led up the hill. He turned around from locking the truck, though they were the only vehicle there, and found Sofie already distracted by her camera. He came around the truck to join her, wrapping his arms around her waist and kissing her ear. “Come on, Andy Warhol, the view is that way.” he teased lightly, and she laughed, turning in his arms to kiss him. Then they parted, and she took his hand again as he led her up the path.
At the top of the hill was a small, flat area for people to stop at, and a bench that looked out over the cove beneath. Perfectly blue water lapped at white sands, the beach curving in a crescent shape beneath smooth golden cliff walls. Raven watched Sofie's eyes light up like a child on Christmas, and she gasped softly.
“Oh Raven!” she breathed, looking up at him. “It's beautiful.”
“Yes. Yes it is.” he replied, meeting her eyes, and she turned pink, looking down and tucking her hair behind one ear in a flustered sort of way.
“I was talking about the ocean, silly.” she said, bumping her hip against his to push him lightly.
“I wasn't.” he snorted as she brought her camera up to one eye to start taking pictures.
“Again with the “beautiful” thing. Been called a lot of hings, but that's not one of them.” she commented offhandedly, making him scowl.
“So are the guys at your college blind or just stupid?” he said, folding his arms in disapproval. How could anyone not notice how lovely she was? And how sweet... Sofie looked up at him, and smiled a little.
“You're too nice to me.” she murmured, then leaned up to kiss him, just as thunder rumbled. The first fat drops of water came down, and they hurried back down to the truck, just in time as a wave of rain swept after them.
Sofie checked her camera over in a worried fashion, and Raven couldn't help but laugh at her. “Oh be quiet!” she shoved his shoulder lightly. “Do you know how sad I would be if my camera got wet?”
“I know, I know, that camera is your baby.” he chuckled as they drove along the main road. He'd seen a secluded spot a ways off the road, and was intending to pull over, grateful that he'd thought to put the camper shell on the back of his truck after surfing that morning. He'd known the storm was coming, and hadn't wanted anything to get wet, since the cab of the truck was too small for his bag. They pulled over into the clearing he'd been aiming for, and parked out of sight of the road. “Leave your camera in here. Come on.” he said, turning the truck off and getting out. In the five minutes it took them to get into the back, both of them were soaked to the bone, so Raven quickly unfolded one of the large foam mats he kept in the back and spread a beach blanket down on it to give them a more comfortable space.
“Do you always keep this stuff in here?” she murmured, and he nodded, sitting up in one corner and stripping his wet shirt over his head.
“Yeah. Sometimes I just camp out on the beach on surfing trips.” he replied. She blushed again as her eyes greedily ran over his bare chest, fastening on the movements of his fingers as he unbuttoned his jeans. “Better get out of your wet clothes.” he said with a wink, and she smiled, pulling her shirt over her head as well, then her bra. Her light pink nipples were already pebbled hard from the cold of wet skin, and raven was abruptly unable to get out of his pants and boxers fast enough. She slid her shorts down in the time it took him to close the space between them, and Sofie gasped as he hooked his fingers behind her knees and dragged her at him, so her body was flat while her hips were lifted. Eyes on hers, he pressed his mouth against the damp fabric clinging to the outline of her pussy and sucked rainwater from her panties. The flesh beneath heated up quickly, and he saw her blue eyes go wide.
“I- I think you're supposed to do that with- without those on.” she whispered, voice mixing with the soothing pattern of rain against the cover over them.
“Excellent idea.” he murmured against her pussy, then swung her over so she was laying the correct way along the blanket. His cock throbbed as he stripped her pretty cotton panties down her legs and set them aside, leaning in again to warm the swollen bare skin of her pussy with his breath. Sofie watched him with wide eyes, and her knees instinctively tried to come in, to shield herself. He brushed them apart again easily, and held them there to contemplate her most intimate spot. She had the same pale skin here as the rest of her, though a solitary freckly dotted the exact middle of her mound. He kissed the freckle, making her jump a little, then spread her folds wide to reveal the wet pink flesh there and set to work with his tongue. Sofie was earthy and sweet, making Raven quite sure that if he didn't thrust inside her right then, he was going to explode. But, priding himself on his patience, he pressed on with the task at hand. Laving every inch of her gorgeous pussy, Raven soon had her moaning and lifting her hips against his mouth. At some point he had slipped a finger inside her, and was working in and out at a sedate pace that she seemed to like, if the way her inner walls were twitching was anything to go by.
“Raven please!” she cried softly, pushing his head down, fingers curling in his hair, and he smirked against her, pinning her clit between his tongue and teeth to suck, while the finger inside her worked her hard and fast. She let out a strangled cry of pleasure, and he felt a sudden slipperiness rush against his fingers as she came, hips bucking up. His cock hardened to the point of pain, and Raven quickly slid on top of her.
Sofie's eyes were bright and eager as she parted her thighs for him. Then she stopped, and suddenly pushed at his shoulders. He rolled onto his back with a show of great control, and was rewarded by her light frame straddling his hips. This afforded him a fantastic view of her breasts, but he was distracted as she reached down to wrap her fingers around his cock. Her body lifted a little, and Raven felt the head of his cock slide into her an inch.
“Wait.” he gritted out between his teeth, catching her hips. “Don't have a condom.” As much as he wanted to fuck her senseless, a baby was no good for either of them right now.
“I'm on the pill.” she smiled, and slid the rest of the way down his shaft. The sensation of her silken heat enveloping him was almost too much. Sofie leaned forward to brace her hands on either side of his head, and looked down at him. “Show me what you like.” she breathed, rocking her hips a little, just enough to make him shudder. He nodded, cupping the perfect curve of her hips and starting to work her up and down in a rhythm she soon picked up naturally on her own. There was something incredibly erotic about having her so innocent, yet so eager to please. Raven groaned, breath hitching as she tightened her pussy against him. He propped himself up on his elbows, and ducked his head a little to suck one of her nipples into his mouth. She moaned, riding him faster as he scraped his teeth over the nub. This was working him quickly towards a climax, though there was no way she could go fast enough. He pulled them both flat, and prompted her to lift her ass a little. She did as he suggested, and cried out a little as he began pounding into her, working his cock in and out of her sweet flesh in a pleasurably quick stroking that soon brought an orgasm washing over both of them.
They lay still for a long time after, her still on top of him, face pressed against his neck. A light trembling had settled over her tiny body, and he folded the blanket up over the both of them to form a warm cocoon. Rain still beat against the roof, but it had evened out a lot, and he knew the storm would pass within the hour. So he stayed still, perfectly content to hold her and rub her back all afternoon.
Finally she moved, shifting just enough to pull off him and lay at his side. They fit perfectly together, the bottoms of her feet snugging against the tops of his, while her head rested on his shoulder. She traced a light design on his bare chest, and didn't look up as she spoke. “I think I love you. But I’m not sure. I don't want to scare you off.” she said quietly in a matter of fact tone. Raven was slightly startled by this revelation, but as that wore off, pleasure took its place.
“You won't scare me off kiddo.” he replied, kissing the top of her head. “I'm not some boy that runs at the first sign of commitment.” She laughed, and he felt the last bit of her relax. Her pliable form molded against him, and he was half thinking about rolling her again when she spoke.
“So now that we've established that, what are we going to do? This...I don't know, I can't see it lasting. I want it to.”
“Mm. Me too, but I do see your point.” he sighed, scowling a little. “Tell you what kiddo, let's just enjoy the summer, as cliche as that sounds. Use the time we've got.” It bothered him to think of her leaving, so he put it out of his mind and tipped her chin up to kiss her. She smiled, and pulled him over on top of her.
“So does that mean I’m your girlfriend now?” she murmured coyly as she ground her hips up to bring him to hardness again.
“Yes.” he replied, kissing her firmly, and grabbing her breast. “Mine.” he growled against her neck, and her giggles turned into moans as he slid inside her again.
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