Puddles the most amazing dog, a short story by hope2121. Date added: 2008-07-20. Times viewed: 1060.

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Intro: About a Dog: I have a secret to tell you but you can't tell anyone ok?
So here is what happened.

At Christmas time as a combined present for Me Sam and my little brother Dan we go a little puppy black little on called Puddles.

When we got him from the shelter down the road, he had been abandoned in the middle of a big storm.

Ever since we got him he loved the rain and storms he would always go walking out in it. That's how he got his name puddles always loves the rain not only that when Dan goes for a bath he tries to climb n as well.

"Mummy, are you sure puddles isn't an alien?" My little brother asked one day when we were having a picnic n our local park. Wed been playing cricket and puddles kept throwing the ball with his mouth and knocking the stumps over.

My mum just smiled and shook her head; my little brother had the biggest imagination for a 3 year old.

Next though Puddles picked up the ball n his mouth and through t perfectly towards my dad who was batting then my dad hit the ball really high in the air puddles jumped about 3 feet and caught it in his mouth.

By now puddles was playing like a professional cricket player, these weren't the most amazing things wed seen him do, he could also kick a soccer ball and make a goal, surf on a surf board. I meant this dog is so unusual I one day saw him sitting at my computer in my room punching in keys. I'm serious this is one unusual dog, but he was fun to have around he was like a human.

Then came a day on the 15th of October 2000 when we had a major storm warning with hail strong winds and lighting.

So while my parents were bringing things inside Dan and I were cleaning up in case power went out and getting supplies read. Puddles started o bark we just assumed he knew there was a storm coming so we went on our way getting ready for the storm. Just as we finished it started raining and lighting struck across the sky.

The puddles rain outside, we were all yelling at him to come back but he wouldn't so dad ran after him. But he was to late a bolt of lighting struck puddles as we watched in dismay as his body fell to the ground he went limb. Dan started to cry and cry he wouldn't stop he begged dad to go and get him but dad explained it was too dangerous and too late.

As the rain topped we went to see were puddles had been hit and say good bye but the most amazing thing happened when I kissed him to say goodbye. He stated to dissolve and after a few seconds puddles turned into a real life boy.

It was like a dream so that's how we ended up having another brother but he kept his name as puddles. But it's our secret alight?

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