Taking Eva, Part 7/ Conclusion, a short story by VelvetKisses. Date added: 2011-06-30. Times viewed: 1187.
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- Intro: Eva and the vampire Nicholas spend their first night together after her ordeal! M/F.
This piece is best read followed by the previous taking Eva segments, but could be read on it's own too.
Please be aware this part does include sexual scenes.
Taking Eva, Conclusion
Well, there’s nothing to keep me here, Eva thought to herself sadly.
She was quite possibly going mad, or had maybe made the first great decision of her life, either way the decision was made. She was leaving this life to live a new one with Nicholas the vampire.
I am definitely mad! She thought, shaking her head as she packed her bags and Nicholas dealt with the bodies of her attackers. She didn’t know what he did with the bodies, and really wasn’t interested.
They were both done in a surprisingly short time. Standing in the middle of her old bedroom, the only place she got some peace in this madhouse, she realised this was the last time she would be in this house or see her family. She knew she should be sorry, but she really wasn’t.
‘Ready?’ Nicholas asked gingerly, unsure she would change her mind.
‘Uhuh,’ was all she said, suddenly feeling very tearful.
‘Come on Bella’, Eva said gently as she tugged on her lead.
Nicholas looked as if she had just said they were moving to Mars.
‘That thing isn’t coming with us’ Nicholas demanded, his voice laced with disdain.
Eva could have slapped him there and then.
‘Nicholas, her name is Bella and if you want me to come with you then she comes too, she’s my family too.’
Even though Nicholas was accustomed to obedience, he knew better than to argue, knew that domineering her would not be a good start to their relationship. He had no choice, a five centuries old vampire was now stuck looking after a puppy.
Eva couldn’t believe how lavish the suite that they were staying in was. It made sense to stay in hotel tonight after everything that had happened but she wasn’t expecting this; everything about the five star hotel screamed expense. The only reason Bella was allowed into the hotel was because Nicholas had used his mind control on the concierge. The suite itself had a bedroom, living room and huge bathroom.
It didn’t seem long before Bella had been taken care of, they had unpacked, Eva had eaten and it was time to talk. Eva was petrified. She was now alone with this handsome yet dangerous creature that she seemed to be more and more drawn to with every passing moment.
Nicholas had been hiding in the bathroom for a good half an hour now. Taking a few tentative steps into the white marble bathroom, she was awe struck. Nicholas had obviously spent a good deal of effort drawing the most luxurious and relaxing bath. The room was covered with candles, the sweet smell of incense hitting her nose. The humungous bath was filled with warm water and bubbles. It all looked absolutely divine.
‘You did all this? For me.’
Nicholas could only nod, too moved to speak. Eva was clearly touched at his actions; he could see the sheen of tears in her eyes and the look of gratitude in her face. He was sure no one had ever done a nice thing for her in her life before now.
‘You can have the bath all to yourself,’ Nicholas assured her, worried to push her too far too soon.
Eva considered this for a while, but knew deep down that she wanted this man, only this man, and she wanted him now. Filled with a sudden confidence, she reached Nicholas, beginning to undo his jeans. Nicholas could have swallowed his own tongue he was so surprised. Gently grabbing her hands, looking into her eyes, he asked the question he had to, if only to save his conscience.
‘Eva, are you sure?’
Looking into his deep black eyes, into his deceptively angelic face, she nodded, completely sure this was what she wanted.
Eva let Nicholas slowly undress her, his hands send sparks over her skin wherever they met. Although nervous, she undressed him too, shocked at his hard muscles and large manhood, and let him lead her to the bath. Eva could have cried at his gentleness, he didn’t actually relax until he had washed every inch of her after her attach. She had never had anyone wash her hair for her; it was definitely a new experience.
As he sat behind her, cuddling her in his strong yet slightly cold hands, she had to ask the questions that had been tugging at the edges of her mind.
‘Yes love,’ he answered while absent mindedly stroking the skin of her back.
‘How come I’m not still severely wounded? I know they beat me enough that I could have even been fatally wounded.’
Nicholas didn’t want to tell her, but knew she deserved the truth.
‘I gave you my blood and you healed. No big deal.’
Somehow she seemed to take this information in her stead.
‘Will I be like you now?’
‘No love, you would have to take my blood twice, then you would be in some pain as your body transformed, but no one would be able to hurt you again like those men did or your father did.’ Nicholas again answered honestly, hoping she would make the decision he wanted her too.
Eva was quiet for what seemed like an eternity, pondering the idea.
‘And you and I, we would be together, always, for eternity?’ Eva asked quite anxiously.
‘More or less love.’ Nicholas again answered honestly.
There seemed there was no more talking to do, Eva turned in the huge bath until she was lying on his torso, her beautiful breasts pressed against his strong chest. It wasn’t long before the evidence of his arousal was pressing into her stomach.
Looking into her eyes, Nicholas knew what Eva wanted, and he was not going to deny her. Nicholas planted a kiss on her lips that sent her head into a complete and utter spin. His lips were like magic. The way his tongue moved inside her mouth sent feelings shooting into the core of her that she never thought she would feel. Nicholas hands began to travel over her body, sending fireworks rocketing off her skin. But suddenly unhappy with the situation, he stood up out of the bath, taking Eva with him like she weighed nothing, and patted them both dry with the luxurious fluffy towels.
Eva gave out a little yelp of surprise, which made Nicholas laugh, as he literally swept her off her feet and led her to the bed. Lying her naked on the plush soft covers, Nicholas crept on top of her like a hunter, full of stealth and experience.
Nicholas looked into her eyes, into her soul, for several minutes. Just when she thought he was never going to kiss her, he reached down and planted the gentlest kiss ever on her lips. But Eva didn’t want gentle, not right then.
Grabbing his gorgeously soft hair, Eva drew him into herself with all her might. She kissed him with every ounce of passion she had, stroking his tongue and nibbling his lips like an expert. It seemed it was the only encouragement Nicholas needed.
He soon moved to her neck, licking, sucking and kissing, but not necessarily in that order, with all of his might. He loved how Eva squirmed beneath his touch, and soon he was stroking down her soft stomach, finding the honey at her core.
Eva nearly exploded at his touch. She had never experienced anything like this before and never wanted it to stop. His fingers were performing magic, so much so she wasn’t sure what was reality and what wasn’t. He had her feeling as if she was on drugs.
Eva nearly cried out aloud when he removed his hands, protesting at the absence of those mini magicians. However Eva did cry out when he replaced his hands with his tongue. If he had given her time to think about it she might have protested at such intimacy, but she was glad he didn’t.
Eva could feel Nicholas’ massive erection press against her skin as he licked and sucked her into a complete and utter frenzy, the feeling inside her building and raging like a storm. Suddenly overcome with a confidence she didn’t know she possessed, she somehow managed to pull him up and quickly grabbed his beautiful erection, wanting to feel it in her hand.
Eva’s hands were driving Nicholas into oblivion. He knew she had never done anything like this before, yet she was using her hands like a pro. She moved up and down his shaft slowly at first, building the tension until he was almost begging, and began to move so fast that he didn’t think he could cope much longer.
‘Eva honey, if you don’t stop I won’t be able to last much longer.’
‘Then don’t Nicholas, I want you inside me, I want you now.’ The sultry look in her eyes and the way she said his name incensed him, and he was like an animal possessed.
Nicholas nudged his huge instrument at her entrance, feeling her slick and wet with her own juices. Eva was already moaning with complete and utter pleasure, encouraging Nicholas further. He nudged further and further until he felt her internal barrier.
‘Eva, honey, this will hurt.’
She was touched at the concern etched into his distressed face, but she wanted him now, despite the pain. Not wanting to wait any longer, she dug her heels into his gorgeously firm buttocks, driving him deep inside her.
They both screamed out loud with the pleasure pain combination. Nicholas was wise enough to stay still for a still while for the pain to pass and for Eva to get used to his massive invasion. But it wasn’t long before she was wiggling her cute little bum beneath him, desperate for him to move inside her.
It wasn’t long before Eva thought she might die, the pleasure and new feelings Nicholas’ was giving to her too much too bear. Nicholas too thought he would die soon and go to heaven if she screamed his name anymore. They were both being driven into a tailspin of pleasure and desire that would end very soon with a very happy ending for them both.
As they neared their climax together, Eva yet again completely and utterly surprised him.
‘Nicholas, feed from me, please! I want you too, and then I want you to feed me, I want to be like you and be with you forever.’
Looking into her eyes, he knew it was what she wanted and didn’t need to ask twice. As they continued to pleasure each other, the rhythm of their moving bodies bringing them closer to orgasm, he made a cut in his chest for her to drink. Lowering her head to his chest, he felt her lick the delicious liquid, and then suck hard, wanting to take as much of the essential liquid as she could.
As they reached their climax together, both of their bodies clenching and tensing with the immense pleasure, Nicholas sank his teeth into Eva’s supple throat, the erotic sensations sending her into a quick second orgasm.
As Eva took her second drink of the essential liquid that would enable her to become a vampire, she knew she had made the right decision, that this was her soul mate, that he would look after her and love her for all her years. Eva felt at home like she never had before.
As Nicholas drank the heady mix of her blood and felt their connection, their bond deepen, with every sip of blood shared, he felt a happiness he had not felt since his human life many many years ago.
Nicholas and Eva spent the rest of the night exploring their newfound happiness.
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